Reading David Copperfield through Dostoevsky: First part, side by side

I started reading David Copperfield after talking with a person who loves it, and almost immediately I had the strange experience of recognizing things I normally associate with Fyodor Dostoevsky while at the same time feeling that I had entered a completely different moral and stylistic world. That tension quickly became the interesting part of the experience. The question was no longer simply whether Dickens “influenced” Dostoevsky in some broad literary-historical sense, but why a novel that feels so unmistakably English, so socially theatrical, so carefully staged, could still contain figures, emotional patterns, and psychological tensions that Dostoevsky would later carry into much darker territory.

The kinship, once noticed, is difficult to ignore. Scholars have long pointed to Dickens’s importance for Dostoevsky’s imaginative development, not merely in the general humanitarian sense of sympathy for the poor, humiliated, and injured. More specifically, comparisons have often been drawn between David Copperfield and Dostoevsky’s later fiction, especially in the portrayal of charismatic and morally dangerous men such as Steerforth and Stavrogin, where fascination, emotional dominance, and spiritual emptiness align with unsettling precision. Once one begins to see this, David Copperfield stops appearing as merely a “Victorian classic” and starts to resemble an early map of problems Dostoevsky would later intensify until they became metaphysical.

At the same time, the differences matter just as much as the similarities. Dickens’s narrative contract is fundamentally stable. His narrator is wounded, ironic, observant, and emotionally intelligent, but also composed; the world, however crowded with eccentrics and grotesques, remains intelligible and narratable. Dostoevsky almost instinctively breaks that stability. His narrators hesitate, over-explain, contradict themselves, lose their balance, and often seem to discover the ground beneath their feet while speaking. Reading David Copperfield after Dostoevsky can therefore feel less like entering a consciousness in crisis than like entering an extraordinarily well-managed theatre in which even suffering has already been assigned its proper place, tone, and sequence.

That is why Dickens can strike a Dostoevskian reader as representative of a distinctly nineteenth-century English dramatic sensibility, and why that impression is not merely prejudice but a recognition of form. Dickens tends to externalize tension into scenes, recognitions, humiliations, reversals, and revelations that remain socially legible. Dostoevsky internalizes and destabilizes them. His equivalent scenes become nadryv: self-laceration, confessions that make everything worse, emotional performances so extreme that they seem almost to expose the metaphysical structure beneath social life. Dickens constructs the stage; Dostoevsky sets it on fire and turns the catastrophe into a metaphysical argument.

Reading David Copperfield is valuable precisely because it clarifies that Dostoevsky did not create his world ex nihilo. The orphaned child, the humiliating visit, the vulnerable woman exposed to shame, the magnetic corrupter, the comic grotesque, the moral shock hidden within domestic life – all these already exist in Dickens, though in forms that are warmer, steadier, and more socially contained. Dostoevsky seems to have recognized that such figures could bear far greater pressure: guilt, divided consciousness, spiritual nausea, demonic fascination. The movement from Steerforth to Stavrogin is not a matter of one character “becoming” the other, but of a literary type migrating from a moral-social universe into a metaphysical-psychological one.

This difference becomes clearest at the level of voice. The opening of David Copperfield is already strange and delightful: the narrator is self-aware, humorous, mildly superstitious, attentive to absurdity, and capable of turning even the sale of his birth-caul into comic autobiography. Yet the prose always remains under control. The irony knows exactly where it is going. Even the digressions are carefully managed. A Dostoevskian narrator, especially one from Demons, would not merely report such details. He would brood over them, derive social and spiritual consequences from them, implicate half the town in them, and perhaps end by confessing that the entire episode was both ridiculous and somehow prophetic.

That, at least, is how I eventually began to hear the opening: first as Dickens wrote it, and then as if some nervous, provincial, semi-ridiculous consciousness from Dostoevsky’s world had seized hold of it and could no longer stop interpreting it. The difference is not merely stylistic. Dickens smiles at contingency; Dostoevsky suspects it. Dickens observes the grotesque; Dostoevsky lets the grotesque deepen into revelation. Dickens turns biography into social art; Dostoevsky turns biography into evidence.

SegmentDickens, David CopperfieldAs if Dostoevsky wrote it in Demons
1CHAPTER 1. I AM BORNCHAPTER 1. I AM BORN
2Whether I shall turn out to be the hero of my own life, or whether that station will be held by anybody else, these pages must show.Whether I am really the hero of my own life, or only an accidental and even somewhat shameful witness to another man’s disorder—since with us everything somehow belongs at once to everybody and to nobody—I cannot say with certainty even now, though I have long since passed the age when one ought to know such things.
3To begin my life with the beginning of my life, I record that I was born (as I have been informed and believe) on a Friday, at twelve o’clock at night.I have been assured, to be sure, that I was born on a Friday, exactly at midnight; and I myself am inclined to believe it, not because there is any great evidence for it, but because in our town such details are never forgotten when once they can be turned against a man.
4It was remarked that the clock began to strike, and I began to cry, simultaneously.It was noticed—I was told this later by people who had no earthly reason to lie, and several who had every reason—that at the very moment the clock began to strike, I began to cry.
5In consideration of the day and hour of my birth, it was declared by the nurse, and by some sage women in the neighbourhood who had taken a lively interest in me several months before there was any possibility of our becoming personally acquainted,There are persons among us, not the most intelligent perhaps, though often the most influential in domestic matters, who are never so happy as when a newborn child immediately furnishes them with a theory. Thus the nurse, and after her several old women from the neighbourhood, women of that peculiar sort who always seem to know something beforehand and are offended if Providence does not consult them,
6first, that I was destined to be unlucky in life; and secondly, that I was privileged to see ghosts and spirits;declared at once that I should be unlucky in life and would see spirits.
7both these gifts inevitably attaching, as they believed, to all unlucky infants of either gender, born towards the small hours on a Friday night.Why unlucky infants born on a Friday towards morning must necessarily see spirits they did not explain; but they were unanimous, and in our province unanimity among old women is taken for almost a branch of theology.
8I need say nothing here, on the first head, because nothing can show better than my history whether that prediction was verified or falsified by the result.As for the first prediction, whether it came true or not, that is a matter these pages may perhaps disclose, unless they disclose only my vanity, which is more likely.
9On the second branch of the question, I will only remark, that unless I ran through that part of my inheritance while I was still a baby, I have not come into it yet.On the second point, concerning spirits, I can state only that, unless I exhausted that inheritance in the cradle, I have not come into it even now.
10But I do not at all complain of having been kept out of this property; and if anybody else should be in the present enjoyment of it, he is heartily welcome to keep it.I do not complain. We have had among us, even without spirits, enough apparitions: men who lived as if they were ideas, women who believed themselves martyrs merely because they had nerves, officials who looked solid enough in daylight and by evening turned out to be mist. If anyone else has taken possession of my ghosts, he is entirely welcome to them.
11I was born with a caul, which was advertised for sale, in the newspapers, at the low price of fifteen guineas.More curious still—and here I ask the reader not to smile too soon, for in these ridiculous little facts there sometimes lies the whole seed of a future absurdity—I was born with a caul.
12Whether sea-going people were short of money about that time, or were short of faith and preferred cork jackets, I don’t know;This, instead of being preserved with proper reverence or at least with decent silence, was advertised for sale in the newspapers for fifteen guineas as a protection against drowning. In itself that is already characteristic.
13all I know is, that there was but one solitary bidding, and that was from an attorney connected with the bill-broking business,A child has hardly entered the world and at once a piece of him is in commerce; the family has scarcely finished crossing itself and already an attorney connected with the bill-broking business appears,
14who offered two pounds in cash, and the balance in sherry, but declined to be guaranteed from drowning on any higher bargain.offering two pounds in cash and the remainder in sherry, though declining to be drowned on any higher terms. Observe, if you please, the national type: he will speculate in anything, even in an infant’s membrane, but only provided responsibility remains theoretical.
15Consequently the advertisement was withdrawn at a dead loss—for as to sherry, my poor dear mother’s own sherry was in the market then—The bargain failed. There was talk of loss, of sherry, of my poor mother’s own sherry being already in the market;
16and ten years afterwards, the caul was put up in a raffle down in our part of the country, to fifty members at half-a-crown a head, the winner to spend five shillings.later the thing was raffled in our district, and I myself, still a boy, was present when this detached and trafficable fragment of my own former person was disposed of among fifty subscribers.
17I was present myself, and I remember to have felt quite uncomfortable and confused, at a part of myself being disposed of in that way.I remember—very distinctly, indeed more distinctly than many later and supposedly important events—that I felt then a peculiar confusion, almost a disgrace, as if it were not a caul being sold but some advance specimen of my conscience.
18The caul was won, I recollect, by an old lady with a hand-basket, who, very reluctantly, produced from it the stipulated five shillings, all in halfpence, and twopence halfpenny short—as it took an immense time and a great waste of arithmetic, to endeavour without any effect to prove to her.It was won by an old lady with a basket, who counted out the required money in halfpence, came up twopence-halfpenny short, and resisted arithmetic with that obstinate, almost triumphant sincerity peculiar to persons who have never doubted themselves once in eighty years.
19It is a fact which will be long remembered as remarkable down there, that she was never drowned, but died triumphantly in bed, at ninety-two.She was never drowned. Everyone repeated this afterward as if a principle had been vindicated. She died in bed at ninety-two,
20I have understood that it was, to the last, her proudest boast, that she never had been on the water in her life, except upon a bridge;and to the last considered it her proudest distinction that she had never been on the water except upon a bridge.
21and that over her tea (to which she was extremely partial) she, to the last, expressed her indignation at the impiety of mariners and others, who had the presumption to go ‘meandering’ about the world.Over tea—of which, like many severe moralists, she was passionately fond—she used to denounce mariners and all who went “meandering” about the world.
22It was in vain to represent to her that some conveniences, tea perhaps included, resulted from this objectionable practice.It was useless to object to her that even the tea she drank arrived through this same meandering.
23She always returned, with greater emphasis and with an instinctive knowledge of the strength of her objection, ‘Let us have no meandering.’She would only repeat, with greater force, “Let us have no meandering.” There are whole political programs among us founded on less.
24Not to meander myself, at present, I will go back to my birth.But I, too, am meandering. That is always the way: one begins with one’s birth and at once the whole town intrudes—the nurse, the old women, the attorney, the sherry, the basket, the bridge—and before you know it, you are not speaking of your birth at all but of an entire provincial metaphysics of pettiness, superstition, commerce, and self-satisfaction, in the midst of which a child, having emitted one cry in time with a striking clock, is entered into life like a defendant into a case. Therefore I will stop here and return, if possible, to the fact itself: I was born.

I’ve now completed my translation of Crime and Punishment into Swedish

After working on my translation of The Brothers Karamazov, I’m excited to announce that I’ve now also completed a Swedish translation of Crime and Punishment! Or, Brott och Straff, as we say in Swedish. This has been an incredible journey, taking on another of Dostoevsky’s masterpieces, which hasn’t seen a Swedish translation in 40 years. What began as a way to ease off and take a break when The Brothers Karamazov felt too overwhelming, gradually evolved into a full translation of Crime and Punishment.

My goal with Crime and Punishment was to not only provide a faithful translation but also to offer detailed notes and commentary to help readers navigate Dostoevsky’s intricate and intense world. The novel dives into deep philosophical themes like guilt, redemption, and the human psyche, and I wanted to ensure that Swedish readers could experience these with fresh clarity. In fact, my translation includes 168 notes, drawing from the insights of scholars such as Michael Katz, Deborah A. Martinsen, and Robert Guay, to deepen the reader’s understanding of Dostoevsky’s work.

Although I don’t speak Russian fluently, I’ve continued to rely on expert English translations, along with these noted scholars’ analyses, to capture the essence of the novel. Just as I did with The Brothers Karamazov, I’ve cross-referenced my work with earlier Swedish translations to maintain fidelity while offering something new for today’s readers.

You can read about my earlier translation of The Brothers Karamazov here.

For now, my Crime and Punishment translation remains in its first version, awaiting the insights of editors and specialists to bring it closer to publication. I’m thrilled to share this milestone and look forward to making Dostoevsky’s work more accessible to Swedish readers.

Här kan du läsa första delens två första kapitel för att se hur jag har översatt boken (pdf).

Comparing Sermons in Dostoevsky’s Literary Universe

This exploration begins with a comparison between two poignant sermons delivered in Dostoevsky’s novels, which vividly encapsulate the author’s profound engagement with the human spirit. A sermon, at its heart, is not merely a religious discourse; it’s an emotional outreach that encourages us to confront and reflect upon the deeper moral and spiritual questions of life. In Dostoevsky’s narratives, these sermons transcend their religious origins to probe the complexities of love, suffering, and redemption.

Alyosha’s Sermon: Embracing Memories and Morality

In the tranquil setting of a graveside in “The Brothers Karamazov,” Alyosha Karamazov addresses a group of young boys, imparting a sermon that intertwines the innocence of youth with the binding force of human connection. This is no ordinary farewell; it’s an impassioned plea to remember and cherish the acts of kindness and bravery shown by their young friend, Ilyusha. Alyosha’s words underscore the significance of carrying forward the memories of love and compassion as beacons against the adversities of life.

His message is deeply rooted in Christian values, emphasizing that the recollection of goodness can inspire and fortify us against life’s darker urges. It’s a hopeful vision that suggests even the smallest acts of kindness are not forgotten but are seeds for future benevolence.

Marmeladov’s Confession: Desperation and the Search for Redemption

Contrasting sharply with Alyosha’s hopeful message is the desperate sermon delivered by Marmeladov in “Crime and Punishment.” In the dim light of a tavern, he pours out his soul to Raskolnikov, revealing the depths of his despair and degradation. Marmeladov recounts the tragic sacrifices made by his daughter Sonya, juxtaposing his own downfall into alcoholism against her purity and selflessness.

His confession is charged with a gritty realism about human frailty and a desperate clinging to the possibility of divine forgiveness. Marmeladov seeks not just sympathy but a path to redemption, believing fervently in a higher power that understands and forgives the most abject of sinners.

Uniting Themes, Diverging Tones

Both Alyosha and Marmeladov use their sermons to delve into the fabric of human connection, emphasizing empathy and the shared experience of suffering. They highlight the potential for memories—whether of innocence or pain—to catalyze moral and personal transformation.

However, the tones of their messages could not be more different. Alyosha’s sermon radiates hope and the potential for moral growth through communal support and cherished memories. In contrast, Marmeladov’s discourse is a harrowing journey through personal torment and societal neglect, ultimately seeking solace in the prospect of divine compassion.

Biblical Echoes and Human Reflections

The sermons also incorporate profound biblical references that enhance their philosophical depth. Alyosha reflects the Gospel’s messages of forgiveness and child-like faith, while Marmeladov’s narrative mirrors the biblical stories of redemption and suffering, akin to the trials of Job.

Concluding Thoughts: The Power of Dostoevsky’s Sermons

Through these sermons, Dostoevsky not only crafts compelling narratives but also invites readers to reflect on fundamental aspects of the human condition. The discussions of love, redemption, and the resilience of the human spirit in the face of suffering offer a timeless meditation on the capacity for both great kindness and great despair.

In examining these sermons, we not only enter Dostoevsky’s rich literary landscapes but also engage with enduring questions about what it means to live meaningfully in a complex and often harsh world.

Shakespeare & Dostoyevsky: A Mirror into the Human Soul

In our journey through literature, every so often we stumble upon characters that seem more real than the very people we interact with daily. The works of William Shakespeare and Fyodor Dostoyevsky offer such characters, each a unique prism reflecting the depths of the human spirit and psyche.

Masters of Manipulation: Dive into the world of Iago (Othello) and Smerdyakov (The Brothers Karamazov). These characters, in their cunning and malevolence, expose the profound vulnerabilities within us all. Their tales force us to ask the uncomfortable questions: Are we, too, susceptible to manipulation? How much of our own reality is shaped by the unseen hands of internal desires and external influences?

Existential Enigmas: The introspective spirals of Hamlet and Ivan Karamazov offer an intimate exploration of the soul’s eternal philosophical battles. As they grapple with profound existential dilemmas, they stand as powerful allegories for our own internal conflicts. Both characters challenge us to face the moral quandaries of our age and ask: In our search for meaning, are we, like them, lost in a maze of our own creation?

Innocence and the Shadow of Temptation: In the stories of Desdemona and Grushenka, we are confronted with the interplay between societal perceptions and individual morality. These characters, one the embodiment of innocence and the other of temptation, compel us to reflect on our judgments and biases. They ask us: To what extent are our views on right and wrong influenced by the society we inhabit?

The Frailty of Familial Bonds: Consider the tales of King Lear and Fyodor Karamazov. These capricious fathers, through their very flaws, illuminate the intricacies of human relationships. They are living reminders of the balance between love, responsibility, and ego. Their narratives emphasize the importance of understanding and compassion, underscoring the delicate threads that weave the fabric of family.

At the heart of these parallels between Shakespeare and Dostoyevsky is an age-old truth: humanity, with all its complexities and contradictions, remains a constant across epochs and cultures. Literature, in its finest moments, does not merely tell tales of yore; it holds up a mirror, reflecting our very souls.

To read these authors is not just to engage in literary appreciation but to embark on a journey of introspection. Through the lives, choices, and fates of their characters, we are offered a deeper understanding of our own nature, aspirations, and fears.

In a world perpetually in flux, let the timeless tales of these literary giants guide us, challenge us, and inspire us to transcend our limitations and embrace our shared human experience.

A bridge over troubled waters: The role of philosophy and humanities in driving innovation and change

Sometimes, people give me a perplexed expression when I mention my philosophy degree from university while working on one of the country’s largest intranets – as if they don’t fully understand the connection between the two.

In a world that centers around technology and natural science, however, we must acknowledge the significance of philosophy and humanities in innovation and change. Scientific and systemic progress is significant, but we must not forget the unique perspectives and insights that philosophy, art, and literature bring.

Philosophy helps us question beliefs, develops critical thinking, and encourages us to explore unknown territories. This mental flexibility opens the door to creativity and innovative solutions when faced with challenges. Why not ask Rawls, de Beauvoir, or Kant if your plans will be fair? And why not inquire of Schopenhauer, Camus, or Kierkegaard if your plan can alleviate the burden of existence and make life a little simpler?

Art and literature provide insight into multifaceted human experiences, teaching us empathy, resilience, and adaptability. Literature delves into complex ideas and emotions, helping us understand the complexities of society while broadening our perspective on problem-solving. Art breaks through linguistic and cultural barriers, creating shared communication and collaboration. Why not ask Shakespeare or Dostoyevsky about the profound depths and irresistible heights of a group of individuals? And why not ask Woolf or Arendt about the consequences of bias and inequality?

By embracing interdisciplinary collaboration and utilizing insights from philosophy, art, and literature, we can overcome traditional constraints and achieve our full potential together. In this way, we create a brighter, more innovative future that builds on both natural science, technology, and humanities.

AI and the Russian Soul: A Philosophical Conversation with Tolstoy, Dostoevsky, Chekhov, Pushkin, and Bulgakov

Scene: A cozy café in St. Petersburg. Five authors have gathered to discuss the implications of technological advancements on the Russian soul.

Tolstoy: “Artificial intelligence confronts us with a philosophical and spiritual challenge. Can a true understanding of human existence be achieved when devoid of our spiritual essence?”

Dostoevsky: “I agree with Leo. If we reduce humanity to mere numbers and statistics, we risk disregarding the human experience, which is defined by suffering and our search for meaning in life.”

Chekhov: “But what about access to technological advancements? If we aren’t careful, progress could leave some people behind. We must ensure equitable access to the benefits of technology.”

Pushkin: “I agree with Anton. But I also see the potential for AI to connect people across cultures and languages, creating a more unified world.”

Bulgakov: “Yes, but we must be careful. AI could also amplify existing inequalities and infringe upon individual freedoms.”

Tolstoy: “I agree with Mikhail. We mustn’t forget that we humans are responsible for imbuing machines with purpose and significance.”

Dostoevsky: “Indeed, Leo. As we confront the question of what it means to be human, we must safeguard our free will against becoming slaves to the machine.”

Chekhov: “But remember that AI is not the end-all solution to our problems. We must always strive to cultivate empathy and compassion in our lives.”

Pushkin: “I see where you’re coming from, Anton. However, I believe having the right intentions when approaching AI can help us build a more just and equitable world.”

Bulgakov: “We must use caution and responsibility as we develop this powerful technology. Let’s ensure AI doesn’t become an instrument of oppression or existing inequalities.”

The conversation was a testament to the enduring spirit of Russian thought and its deep contemplation of the ever-changing world.

Choosing the best Karamazov translation for you

The Brothers Karamazov by Fyodor Dostoevsky is a true masterpiece, and I re-read it regularly. I also read it in English since many of the major Dostoyevsky commentators and scholars write in English. This book has many English translations, and I have gone back and forth between them before ending in the Oxford World’s Classics version, translated by Ignat Avsey as “The Karamazov Brothers.” There is, of course, no “best” translation of any book, but here I will show you why this translation works best for me.

I can start by comparing one of my favorite passages in the book, where they meet in the monastery, and Father Zosima sees right through Fyodor’s buffoonery. The original translation into English seems to be Constance Garnett’s:

Above all, don’t lie to yourself. The man who lies to himself and listens to his own lie comes to such a pass that he cannot distinguish the truth within him, or around him, and so loses all respect for himself and for others. And having no respect he ceases to love, and in order to occupy and distract himself without love he gives way to passions and coarse pleasures, and sinks to bestiality in his vices, all from continual lying to other men and to himself.

For me, who has English as a second language, this is a good translation although it feels a bit formal.

David McDuff has translated the same passage into the following:

The main thing is that you stop telling lies to yourself. The one who lies to himself and believes his own lies comes to a point where he can distinguish no truth either within himself or around him, and thus enters into a state of disrespect towards himself and others. Respecting no one, he loves no one, and to amuse and divert himself in the absence of love he gives himself up to his passions and to vulgar delights and becomes a complete animal in his vices, and all of it from perpetual lying to other people and himself.

For some reason, this translation feels a bit awkward to me, and McDuff has a choice of words and a style that hinder more than help me. I know McDuff appeals to many who have English as their first language, but for me, it doesn’t take me all the way to a good understanding.

A translation that has gained a lot of attention, positive as well as negative, is the one from Richard Pevear and Larissa Volokhonsky. Their version of the same text is:

A man who lies to himself and listens to his own lie comes to a point where he does not discern any truth either in himself or anywhere around him, and thus falls into disrespect towards himself and others. Not respecting anyone, he ceases to love, and having no love, he gives himself up to passions and coarse pleasures, in order to occupy and amuse himself, and in his vices reaches complete bestiality, and it all comes from lying continually to others and to himself.

Pevear and Volokhonsky are famous for reinventing Dostoyevsky’s translated language, and we can sense it in just this small text. Some people find this reinvigorating, while others shudder at the thought of translators trying to improve the language of Dostoyevsky, Tolstoy, and more. Initially, I found the Pevear and Volokhonsky translation to be the best, but all the sharp remarks about this translation destroying Dostoyevsky’s text made me look around a bit more.

Finally, I found the translation by Ignat Avsey which I have heard many positive remarks about. Yes, he omits using the Latin Pro/Contra and uses Pros/Cons for Book 5, he calls Book 10 “Schoolboys” instead of just “Boys”, and he omits ‘Brother’ in Book 11 so it is called “Ivan Fyodorovich” instead of “Brother Ivan Fyodorovich”. But no translation is perfect, and he uses a language that appeals to me and many others:

He who lies to himself and listens to his own lies reaches a state in which he no longer recognizes truth either in himself or in others, and so he ceases to respect both himself and others. Having ceased to respect everyone, he stops loving, and then, in the absence of love, in order to occupy and divert himself, he abandons himself to passions and the gratification of coarse pleasures until his vices bring him down to the level of bestiality, and all on account of his being constantly false both to himself and to others.

There is something about the rhythm and choice of words that appeal to me, and that helps me understand the characters.

A final version of the above writing is from Andrew R. MacAndrew and the Bantam Classic version, which also is pleasing to me:

A man who lies to himself, and believes his own lies, becomes unable to recognize truth, either in himself or in anyone else, and he ends up losing respect for himself as well as for others. When he has no respect for anyone, he can no longer love and, in order to divert himself, having no love in him, he yields to his impulses, indulges in the lowest forms of pleasure, and behaves in the end like an animal, in satisfying his vices. And it all comes from lying—lying to others and to yourself.

Another example is the last sentence of the first paragraph in the book, describing Fyodor’s muddleheadedness.

Garnett:

I repeat, it was not stupidity —the majority of these fantastical fellows are shrewd and intelligent enough—but just senselessness, and a peculiar national form of it.

McDuff:

I repeat: here there was no question of stupidity; the bulk of these madcaps are really quite sharp and clever – but plain muddle-headedness, and, moreover, of a peculiar, national variety.

Pevear/Volokhonsky:

Again I say it was not stupidity—most of these madcaps are rather clever and shrewd—but precisely muddleheadedness, even a special, national form of it.

Avsey:

Let me repeat yet again: this was not a case of stupidity—most of these crackpots are shrewd and cunning enough—but of muddle-headedness, and of a special, typically Russian kind.

MacAndrew:

Let me repeat: it was not stupidity, for most such eccentrics are really quite intelligent and cunning, and their lack of common sense is of a special kind, a national variety.

Put simply, Avsey’s and MacAndrew’s languages make the text more direct and lands in my mind in another way that the other translator’s texts do.

As a final comparison, we can hear the different versions of how Mrs. Khoklakova and her daughter Lise are introduced:

Garnett:

Mrs Khokhlakova, a wealthy lady, always dressed with taste, was still quite young and very comely in appearance, somewhat pale-skinned, with very lively, almost completely black eyes. She could not have been more than thirty-three years old and had been a widow for about five years. Her fourteen-year-old daughter suffered from paralysis of the legs. The poor girl had been unable to walk for about six months, and had to be wheeled around in a long Bath-chair on rubber-rimmed wheels. She had a charming little face, somewhat thin from sickness, but cheerful.

McDuff:

Mrs Khokhlakova, the mother, a rich lady who always dressed with taste, was a person still quite young and very pleasant to the gaze, somewhat pale, with eyes that were very lively and almost completely black. She was no more than thirty-three, and she had already been a widow for some five years. Her fourteen-year-old daughter was afflicted by a palsy of the legs. The poor young girl had been unable to walk for the past half-year, and she was wheeled about in a long bath chair. She had a charming little face, somewhat thin from her illness, but full of gaiety.

Pevear/Volokhonsky:

Madame Khokhlakov, the mother, a wealthy woman, always tastefully dressed, was still fairly young and quite attractive, slightly pale, with very lively and almost completely black eyes. She was not more than thirty-three years old and had been a widow for about five years. Her fourteen-year-old daughter suffered from paralysis of the legs. The poor girl had been unable to walk for about half a year already, and was wheeled around in a long, comfortable chair. Hers was a lovely little face, a bit thin from illness, but cheerful.

Avsey:

Mrs Khokhlakova, a wealthy lady, always dressed with taste, was still quite young and very comely in appearance, somewhat pale-skinned, with very lively, almost completely black eyes. She could not have been more than thirty-three years old and had been a widow for about five years. Her fourteen-year-old daughter suffered from paralysis of the legs. The poor girl had been unable to walk for about six months, and had to be wheeled around in a long Bath-chair on rubber-rimmed wheels. She had a charming little face, somewhat thin from sickness, but cheerful.

MacAndrew:

Mrs. Khokhlakov, a wealthy woman, always tastefully dressed, was still young and very pretty; she was rather pale, with very lively, almost black eyes. She was no more than thirty-three and had been a widow for five years. Her fourteen-year-old daughter, whose legs were paralyzed, had been unable to walk for six months and had to be pushed around in a wheelchair. She had a charming face, a little emaciated by sickness, but cheerful.

 

In this version, MacAndrew leads the way in portraying the mother and her daughter in front of me. The language is not a hindrance but his version is true to the original. For example, he describes the mother as “very pretty” instead of comely in appearance, or pleasant to the gaze.

Finally, an interesting remark from Avsey, is that the book should be called “The Karamazov Brothers” since that is the order of words English speaking people use:

One need go no further than the title, the standard English rendering of which is The Brothers Karamazov. This follows the original word order, the only one possible in Russian in this context. Had past translators been expressing themselves freely in natural English, without being hamstrung by that original Russian word order, they would no more have dreamt of saying The Brothers Karamazov than they would The Brothers Warner or The Brothers Marx.

Don’t lie to yourself

“Above all, don’t lie to yourself. The man who lies to himself and listens to his own lie comes to a point that he cannot distinguish the truth within him, or around him, and so loses all respect for himself and for others. And having no respect he ceases to love.”

― Fyodor Dostoyevsky, The Brothers Karamazov

By far, this is the quote by Dostoyevsky that has had the most impact on me. Privately, to prioritize my time and energy, professionally to look through the intranet industry I work in. Some things can become the truth, just because we repeat them too many times for ourselves. Finally, we become like the frog entering the cold water, and never noticing the temperature gradually rising until it dies from not escaping the boiling water. Nobody wants to be bitter on the deathbed, but people are every day. Don’t be one of them.

“Above all, don’t lie to yourself” is a good start to any day. We all have limited resources and we owe it to ourselves, and others, to make the best of it. By telling ourselves the truth regarding who we are, were we stand, what feels good, what feels bad, and where we should move, we listen more to our hearts than to our minds. I promise, you will never regret that. Ceasing to love is never worth it.

The Double by Dostoyevsky – a movie that saves this year of movies

[blockquote cite=”Dostoyevsky” type=”left, center, right”]We have all lost touch with life, we all limp, each to a greater or lesser degree.[/blockquote]

No matter how hard Godzilla pounds its enemies, angry people chase bitter people in cars, or secret agents pretend to be happy, none of them beat this movie this year: The Double based on Dostoyevsky’s work.

An interesting take on what would happen if we met ourselves, but with different personality traits. And it goes back to the choices we make in life, the crossroads where we select which way to take. Learning from another version of yourself, formed by other impressions, but still the same as you.

If you want to read the original book, I found the Double online at Penn State University.